Rolling along or slapping out

Jimmy Olsen: Could you swing by and pick this up for me? Superman: No problem.

This author [me] is eighteen writing days into HLP, eighteen chapters at more than 20,000 words.

This week has had some hard writing days keeping up my one-chapter-per-day goal.

Homer is setting up a one-man pizzaria. He is able to purchase two essential used items at auction for almost nothing. However, I can’t just write, “Homer picked up the Hobart and plugged it in.”

The mixer weighs nine-hundred pounds! You have to find a means of transporting your auction winnings, get there, load everything, secure it, bring it home, and move it into place. You will need a forklift, chains, straps, chocks, and more. You need a heavy trailer and a heavy duty picke up (at least). How do you unload it? You might need new electrical where it’s going.

I had to learn all these things in order for the passages to be both concrete and realistic. At the same time, the passages cannot be a how-to documentary. It has to be human. It has to make the reader feel something and learn something important.

Many thanks to my five readers.

 


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